All Comments on 'A Friendly Visit'

What a letdown, just when things were moving in the right direction.

Story was well written, just the ending left something to be desired

I like the story and was wondering which way you were going then ...

Wow.

I loved the story, but I wasn't ready for the end. It was still a great story! Just a sad twist!

I loved the whole story but the endidng runined it for me!

That was a beautiful story. I can relate to it until the ending. It did not have to be that way. Very sad and a let down.

wow, some story there, i just loved it until the end, oh please change the ending and make where they get together instead of her dying, oh please, keep writing this story, and change it to where she's alive and not dead!!!!!!!!!

I think it is a bad idea to not give your main character a happy ending by not killing her off at the end of the story! Most of your readers would like to have seen her go off to marry him at the end.

Long-winded. Weird ending - should have been 3rd person. Made no sense as is.