All Comments on 'A Fucking Investment Ch. 04'

Please continue.

Keep the chapters coming. What a stroker! Had a hard time holding off to the end.

Nice action! Everyone was caught up in the SEX so nobody lost out!

Advice: Take a bit of time to identify changes in conversation & references to your characters; I was having to guess which woman was doing what to whom.

Nice of the ladies to willingly advance and improve his plan. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.