by Contrasting
Best yet. Although i'm not particularly liking the scenario of Foil, Touche. It goes afield of original, fascinating plot of seducing the owners against their wills. But his chapter was so well done I applaud you. Love the description of Crowley's voice...as wrenching metal. Eve's inability to stay away is intriguing and now she owes him. Take all the time you need to establish her repayment plan. Wonderful story. -- Threedayride
Everything the woman she sat with about the woman said sex or 'fuck me and I will fuck you'.
???? leave out a word or two in this sentence?
RE: leaving out words. Okay, yep, mangled that bugger up. It should be to this effect: Everything about the woman sitting with Eve said sex or "fuck me and I will fuck you." Thanks for noticing. -C