All Comments on 'A Game of Chance'

I had two problems with this story:

First - There were structural problems. Time changes, some for weeks or months, happened with no transition.

Second - The setup had the premise to be about submission. The wife was a bitch at the start and then became invisible, as far as interaction was concerned until almost the end. And what an end, suddenly this girl who has been treated as a submissive pet for four months, is humiliated, abused, tortured, and disfigured. It's as if a baseball game changed to tennis in the eighth inning.

Now I want the start of the revenge chapters.... and she gets to keep the dog.

This story was amazing true art I was hooked*<* so sad about the hair. But have to know did she even get paid or did I missed that part before she ran?

Not sure if my.other comments got through amazing story hooked and wanna read it again. But did she even get paid?

It seems unfinished. What happened to her after that? Did she just sit on the floor while she died of thirst? It needs an epilogue.