All Comments on 'A Generous Older Woman'

by BrooklynObserver

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symtronsymtronover 14 years ago
Whooooo_Hoooooo!!!!

DAng, I neva had a friends mom to be so nice to me.

Okay, I know its a story, not true.....but..

The writing kept my interest, it was a one chapter story, but well written. Quick buildup to the "meat" but thats okay. Hopefully there will be more chapters with more behind the scenes info.or just more interaction between the two and maybe a sister of the mom or two?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Every young man's dream

Absolutely outstanding storytelling...one could believe that this is an actual recounting of every young man's fantasy. Truly a generous older lady, but the story can't end here. Thanks.

BrooklynObserverBrooklynObserverover 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for the feedback! You guys want a part two? What should happen?

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERover 14 years ago
OUTSTANDING

It is every young mans dream to be seduced by and older babe I was taken by an older babe it was heaven, need to see more chapters of this thak you

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More

Oh yeah, there has got to be another couple of chapters to this. Surprise us.

foldedpaperfoldedpaperover 14 years ago
Wow - if that's true, I'm jealous!

That was a great story - I really enjoyed it. If there is a further development, I look forward to reading it. Thanks!

kalodinkalodinover 5 years ago
One of my favorites

What else is there to say. Just a marvelously well written little fantasy that grabs me every time.

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