All Comments on 'A Gentle Push'

Hey , thank you (twice)...that was a fun romp...slow build...then a tumble ending...was smiling all the way through 😊

Rick

should be followed by a Swift KICK. tk u mlj lv nv

Well tazz317, I'm sorry but I'm unable to respond to your comment as I'm sadly failing to understand what you're saying. My guess is you don't like it? Well I'm sorry I failed to please you with this offering. Try some more or don't as you see fit. I have large shoulders and can stand you're disliking it, but if I am to grow as a writer, then I need an understandable criticism.