All Comments on 'A Gift for Her'

After a stressful day at home, the little details of a lover husband are the ones who get a great day for a wife.

Not all men are able to give this sense of well-being to their partners, we have too selfishness in ourselves and we do not realize the needs of our wives.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

Short, to the point, and well descriptive of the action. Enjoyed!

Pretty good. You just need some editing. "She emoted" really should be "she said."

"Per say" is wrong. It's "per se" and there are errors of punctuation too.

Are you aware that nobody in this has a name? He, she, middle daughter - you need to give them names.

Thanks for the feedback. This is my first posting and I have 3 more to submit. I'm working without an editor and its very difficult to proof read your own work. I'm bound to have a few typos.

I will watch out for these sort of mistakes.

Like a breath of fresh air

What a lovely story...Yes there were some problems with wording and spelling but the gist of the story was there.

This story was magical! Truly a gift! Ive been having trouble find erotic I can enjoy because I have a lot of sexual trauma, but this was so perfect. Thank you so much!

Too bad I never thought of doing something like this for my wife. She would have loved it. I guess that I lack imagination.

Thanks to your comments and suggestions, I've resubmitted this story, adding names and cleaning it up wherever I could see problems.