All Comments on 'A Gift From Lila'

VERY GOOD FIRST STORY. NOW WE NEED A FOLLOW UP

VERY QUICKLY.

Fantastic story. don't stop with it now. Give us more. Can't wait. You got me horny now go with it honey.

Would have gone higher than 75...more like 89! This is your First submission??!!!? Good Job! Keep Writing. Please! W

Love it, great quickie seduction, great description. Please write a followup as soon as you can.

No chance of that, my dear - you stepped up to the plate and hit that one out of the park! For a seasoned writer, it's darned good. For a first submission, it's nothing short of awesome. Nice work!

I'll have part two up soon (hopefully) where Lila and Katie will have a threesome.

Great start, keep up the good work! You've already committed to a sequel, but take it further, if you want. Never mind the 75%, being a pantyhose fan, that's as "good" as it gets without "them". If you will "add" them, I'd appreciate it, if not I'll still read your story / stories, anyway.

Good for a first submission. I like the way your mind works. You might consider having an editor take a look at your stories before submitting. Keep writing!

Please check out part 2 under Group Sex...

I began kissing her back. It had to be the champagne. Poor Katie she was sexually assaulted. Alcohol and sex it's a crime.