by northlander
I am addicted to loving wives but this one tastes good to me even without hot sauce..
I had more hope for it in the begining. The writting seems a bit amature. You don't need to put "he said" "she replied" every single time - it gets a bit distracting. The plot is sweet if not a bit obvious. It seems a bit unrealistic at a lot of points. I did give a 4 because dispite all you seem talented. Thank you for sharing!
Hopeful. A dark day and reopened heart wounds, still there is possible bonding rapport that is heartwarming like a kindling light at night. Good luck. Things may get worse before they get better...