All Comments on 'A Girl in Need Ch. 05'

Bring on the next part soon please

The counterpoint with the police work and Laura problem make it very interesting.

Good writing and the story is getting interesting, maybe some surprises from Laura?

"The games afoot, watson!" There are many unforseen consequences. The experienced hunter is very methodical. It was taught in military school, " proper planning prevents poor performance!" There seems to be more hidden than what been discovered