by AbbiZane
Excellent story. Well Told. I'd like to read more about their future encounters.
Tremendously well written. Very hot. I've a MMF story percolating, very much in the same vein. Thanks for the inspiration. I'll be checking out your other work.
we, a couple, doing an inexperieced girl, for her first time , is unbeleviable erotic. ,
When we did Sandra together, she absoletly, demanded to swallow him off , as a thank you present -- OMG Sandra, Sandra
Very well written with believable characters one can visualise and like. Very sensual descriptions of growing desire and wonderfully lyrical sex — too few writers even try to describe what sex and orgasms feel like. I hope you will write more.
Don't quit, you're quite good, keep going!!! Loved it!
Beautifully told, and simply dripping with authenticity found all so rarely on Literotica. So many lovely touches - well done!
More erotic because it is so well written and well paced. And the detail suggests it is based in a real experience? Even more erotic
This story is great, both in character and in eroticism. I can't wait to read more of your work.
So hot. Very descriptive and the way you described the characters' emotions was sublime.
It's a rare treat to find a well-written and very hot story but this was certainly one of them - more please!
You did a great job of describing the events from the physical standpoint, but also showed us what you were feeling so very nicely. Well done! J.
I want to write like this someday. Yes the sex was great, but it was the presentation the writing, that got me excited. Well Done, but I'm sure you've heard that before.
Liked the sexy stuff, of course, and liked Lauren's thoughts too.