All Comments on 'A Girl's Weekend in Amsterdam'

by SooBee

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BluegrayBluegrayover 14 years ago
fun weekend

Super story! You made us feel the excitement as well as telling us who you are.

Thanks for a great read!

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 14 years ago
More?

I sure hope there's more of this weekend. Lotsa gals to tell us about!

KathrynClutKathrynClutover 14 years ago
Loved it MORE please

I loved the story and the explanation of you thoughts and feelings especially your thoughts on how you fantasise over exhibiting yourself. I can't wait for the rest of the story when you get back to the hotel, please let it be soon coming.

Love and Kisses

Kathryn

XXXXXXX

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
more??

i liked how u got into full detail.. hopefully u will tell on how the rest of the weekend went!! i liked it a lot, i just wished u had finished it before u published it...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
yes please more???

And her birthday is just around the corner... What a show... Thanks

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 14 years ago
It's hot in the Netherlands

At least it was hot at the show where the gals attended the sex show. Now you must tell us what happened afterwards at the hotel. I'm sure that story must be as good as this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow!!

Fantastic story, would love to hear part 2 :)

Siska100Siska100almost 5 years ago

Good story,

I would have preferred if Sue and Jane would have ended on stage, instead of going to the secrecy of their room to do it.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrabout 2 years ago

That was a great setup

You are a very good writer, I just wish you had done the 2nd chapter!

;->

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