All Comments on 'A God Called Bruce Pt. 02'

by Talemaster

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zarroc789zarroc789almost 12 years ago
keep it up

This is better than the first one funnier to This is the best story I have ever read please keep it up OK. Thanks for this buy the way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please never stop writing!

The humor, sex and great story line provide the best read!!! I hope you never stop writing...lol, and teaching me Australian English:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
!!

Best story on the site! I love it! Glad it will come out fast and I will be sad when it finishes. 5 Stars from me and I'd give 1million stars if I could!

Keep up the good work!

Tommy.

thatrobthatrobalmost 12 years ago
I beg you,please do not stop.

This just gets better by the sentence.Chapter one was a riot,and chapter two is a full fledged rebellion. Please bring more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

One of the most entertaining reads ever. Thanks for sharing and please keep the story going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great writing........

I love your story, please keep it up. Thanks!

Kinkerbell84Kinkerbell84almost 12 years ago
Ummm....

African God of AIDS? Seriously??? And he has to look like a black pimp. Totally made me stop reading which is sad because I was enjoying the story. Not cool.

thor_pfthor_pfalmost 12 years ago
Of all the versions of Genesis, this one was by far the most entertaining.

Still lovin' it!

cylinderlitcylinderlitover 11 years ago
How long is this gonna go! only pt. 2!

not complaining just awestruck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
the best so far

i just finished pt.2 and cant stop reading i am a huge fan of scify and this is awsome. i cant belive just how complex your writing is i am a fan for life now. great work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
good

but it might've been better if the sex was more descriptive

TarlosoTarlosoalmost 6 years ago
Nice

Funny,but also well researched

jwmcleanjwmcleanalmost 4 years ago
Not being Aussie

I am having a translation problem to a small degree. But the story is wonderful thank you very much. When I first started it I was a bit put off that it was going no where but by the time you introduced the parents I was hooked. Wonderful pacing and the inter-personal play is very well done.

DeLord12804DeLord12804over 2 years ago

I liked what I found on the first page, liked the comments I found on the last page, then jumped back to the top of the second page and it's off to the races. I'm lovin it!

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