by Talemaster
This is better than the first one funnier to This is the best story I have ever read please keep it up OK. Thanks for this buy the way.
The humor, sex and great story line provide the best read!!! I hope you never stop writing...lol, and teaching me Australian English:)
Best story on the site! I love it! Glad it will come out fast and I will be sad when it finishes. 5 Stars from me and I'd give 1million stars if I could!
Keep up the good work!
Tommy.
This just gets better by the sentence.Chapter one was a riot,and chapter two is a full fledged rebellion. Please bring more.
One of the most entertaining reads ever. Thanks for sharing and please keep the story going.
African God of AIDS? Seriously??? And he has to look like a black pimp. Totally made me stop reading which is sad because I was enjoying the story. Not cool.
Still lovin' it!
i just finished pt.2 and cant stop reading i am a huge fan of scify and this is awsome. i cant belive just how complex your writing is i am a fan for life now. great work
I am having a translation problem to a small degree. But the story is wonderful thank you very much. When I first started it I was a bit put off that it was going no where but by the time you introduced the parents I was hooked. Wonderful pacing and the inter-personal play is very well done.
I liked what I found on the first page, liked the comments I found on the last page, then jumped back to the top of the second page and it's off to the races. I'm lovin it!