by harrietmarwood
Fantastic... what Control ,, what Domination of a youth! Absolutely the BEST!
This is an excellant story! You write as well as Jane Marwood and the plots and characters are as good as anything she's posted. Please keep posting on this site. There is so little of this particular genre to be found anywhere. I can't wait to see what Dr. Underwood has in store for our young man. Thank you for sharing this with us.
This is one of the best stories I've ever read! I wish I were Timmy, living his life!
You simply must continue this story! So delightfully perverse, and so well-written to boot. Bravo!
My suggestion would be to consider adding a beautiful young lady around Timmy's age, or perhaps a titch older. She'd be dominant over Timmy, of course, but subordinate to Mommy. What exactly might transpire I leave to your delightfully twisted mind, my dear Lady Harriet.
Not that you seem in much need of it, but should you require an editor and/or proofreader, please don't hesitate to contact me! <3
I have one suggestion, it really disrupted the story for me (can't speak for others) having the boy's moans actually written out. It would flow better for me if you just added something in a paragraph saying "Timmy whimpered/moaned beneath her".
Regardless, great story, very well written, I especially enjoyed the descriptions of what she saw as she took him, very arousing seeing it from her point of view!
Please write more about this wonderful relationship! I'm awfully envious of Timmy. Such a lucky boy to feel her love so deeply.
Very erotic descriptions of beautiful bodies, and I love the sharp contrast between Jeannette's soft, feminine appearance and her sadistic desires. Her clothing is sexy, the bondage is well-described, and I LOVE the scene with the double-dildo.
This is a fantastic piece!
Story! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️'s,added you to my favorites and love you're little profile pic lol
Please make a part 2 of this masterpiece! Oh lord,what I wouldn't give to meet someone like Jeanette when I was a horny,ready to fuck anything that walked(women only) 18 year old😊Thanks Again!
if I had a delicious little Timmy Iwould take it much slower. hate to see him "opened up"so far .Iwould savor him bit by bit.wouldlove if Jeanette used smaaller toys on him and you described the pain A young boy should be broken in bit by tender bit.
This was awesome...panties, diapers and strapon....I struggled to stop myself cumming before I reached the end. Part 2 please mommy.