All Comments on 'A Good Morning'

This was a very good story, but I would like it to have been a little longer. Keep up the great work.

indeed!

Enjoyed it very much, Thanks.

That read like you were in our bedroom! I could've written it (but not as well) to describe my husband and I...as we celebrate our 23rd anniversary!! Great read!

What a wonderful morning! And so nice that he made sure she got hers first! I really liked the pacing, and the way you kept track of the body's positions while they're moving around on the bed. Nothing quite so wierd as to be picturing a couple in one position, then find them somewhere else in the next sentence, with no transitional dialogue or narration. That'll take you right out of the story every time. Nice job, desertslave.

So sexy and loving and funny! yet realistic too. (I loved it so much I'm going to review it on my blog Feminist Erotica.)

Just towards the end, the protagonist lifted what?

Still, it's nice to fantasize; I gave it 5* for making me feel good.

That was a refreshing tale. I know I dream of being able to wake up that way. Thanks for the read!!! * * * * *

You have such a good touch for making scenes visible in my mind and the interaction between the lovers is so well written and realistic. It is highly erotic.

Thank you for this story.

Wow!++

What the hell!?!?!?!?!?!? A good story that was decently written. Color me shocked!