by Liz_The_Dragon
I like the pacing although I wish the chapters were a bit longer. Still this is very compelling. I'm not normally a big fan of pet play, but I'm glad I clicked on this story. I like the approach so far. Very hot! Keep writing, I can't wait to see where this goes. :D
I'm loving your story! I have just recently began reading pet play and I have to say this one is probably one of my favorites so far :)
Very sweet and cute, with just the right amount of kinky. You simply MUST continue! <3
I love your writing style and your balance of petplay and lust is on point!
More please
Thank you for this excellent chapter, please do keep writing about these adorable characters. I will be interested to see how Beth's friends and family take to her new lifestyle.
introducing the nuances of a full Owner-pet relationship. Your writing style is easy to read, capturing the budding complexity of your characters.
I hope you are up for writing more chapters. Please keep writing.
And it kinda reminds me of me and my own friend as well =w= Thanks so much for writing this!
the 1st one is bad enough you had to ad a pt 2 to this, good thing there is no more than 2 pt's
I dont care what other people say this is really well written and really hot
It is a cute and romantic story. Thank you very much for writing it. Wish you well))