by dr_mabeuse
This is so good. When I first read this story, ch. 04 was nowhere to be found, so I tried to imagine what happened. My imagination didn´t come close. I´m glad I could find it now. The realization that he is in love is perfect and made my heart ache in a bittersweet way.
You are a seriously good writer. As to the story.....jesus.
Wish I could write like this.
many of your varied stories.i appreciate your superior gift of story telling.i'm taking the opportunity to thank you Dr.M.,writers like you are so kind for sharing your dreams,your stories with the rest of us. when you put into words my dark,vivid sexual dreams,i realize it's okay,that i am this way.others are this way too.amen
You have redefined what a 5 star rating is.
I'll be giving out a whole lot more 4s now.
Wow.
Thanks! I love the complicated real emotions, and bdsm without torture etc.
It usually takes a lot to get me off but one of your stories and I'm gone.
No ones stories have ever gotten me off like that, you have raw talent.
I can't believe how easy you make it seem to look into a part of me I didn't know existed and put it on the screen. Now I just need to convince my guy to play Conner! ;-P
I have never Had a abduction fantasy before but I do now! The scene where Emma runs out into the rain...mmmmm! I love the way conners desire turns animalistic...knows what he wants and takes it...
Midnight S
Damn!!! I'v had sex in the rain, in a muddy field but not as hot as that. Thank you for the incredibly arousing as fuk story! Pls keep up the great sexy work!
Now horney as hell, girl with a dirty secret
I've always had those fantasties, of being tied up and kidnapped, ever since i was a little girl.. i never thought it would lead to this. i was sent here as a joke from one of my friends, rying to make me blush.. i really enjoyed this story.. maybe now i know what i am looking for. :)
I applaud the upgrade in the technical aspects of your writing. You have become a much more profesional writer as befits your obvious storytelling skills.By all means, perservere. It will only benefit you in the long run.
Kidnapping is a common fantasy. It is probably more fun to imagine than to actually experience. Reality seemed to come and go. What does he have planned at his place?
Oh, I love your stories, Sir! Your story and descriptions are so thorough, I feel it all, every nuance of emotion. Yummy!