All Comments on 'A Good Way to Forget'

I understand this is fiction but sticking a large, unlubed cock in someone's ass does not seem erotic nor feel food for either party.

Your writing is too formal and sentences feel unnecessarily long. Use simpler words. I don't even know what this means: "Hypnosis in the form of Nathan's nude body didn't reach an effective conclusion." Use fewer words in sentences and fewer big words. It takes away from the flow of the story because I had to spend time figuring out what you were trying to say. Relax and don't try so hard to impress us with your words. Just tell the story. Keep writing!

Really enjoyable story, hope you have another chapter coming soon. This one did not really have an ending.

Lots of hot sex........wish Theo had fucked Nathan on his back - young body like his has to be seen and spread wide for proper fucking......and watching his eyes as your cock enters him and pounds his young sweet tight boypussy.........write more about them !