All Comments on 'A Good Wife Shouldn't Drink'

But I'm sure I'll love the divorce and death of Sam Chapter

Fantastic story! I think your main character has the ability to grow into other erotic stories that fit well into her new slut wife role. This good wife is not the first to screw outside of her marriage. A chapter two is in high demamd. I hope you will consider it. The writing was as good as it gets and I couldn't pull away until the very last word.

All my life i firmly believed that a good wife should not drink. But i also learned the hard way that if a wife does something very stupid, whether intoxicated or sober, she definitely deserve another chance.

I know some people will call me a sick fuck, but that's life.

This story was really hot...up until the "my husband can't have kids...pregnant" part. Hot story. I also love how the social justice warriors talk bad about your story and morals...after even being on the site and reading the story

Finnish the bloody story

I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read. But I do think it deserves a follow up. and not the way FTDS did it. I see no reason for Marty to get hurt by telling him. If she's pregnant, she should take care of it and move on, maybe sleep with Sam again but not to get into an affair, just once ever so often. Anyway I loved your story. and I think you should write some more stories like this. Nobody needs to get hurt. they got drunk and made a mistake that shouldn't ruin all their live's. She is not the first wife that does that. I've known quite a few that made the same mistake and they are still with their husbands.

For me, not a good story! Marty is the epitome of DUMB-ASS....stupid as can be concerning his "so called" friend, Sam! Why not just lead the fox to the hen-house, open the door and say, "have at it"!

I actually believed she was being fucked thoroughly,that doesnt happen much...5/5

...nightmares are made of.

This story of yours is quite popular: 449,537 views, 311 favorites, 111 comments.

By the way, PTremer's submission Stange Afternoon was inspired by this story; it is the only story on his list of favorites.

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In my book, when your friend is completely wasted & fast asleep as a result, his wife is fair game. Be nice to her, but do make a move on her.

Marty, a real horse's ass! He knows the bastard Sam is a player and still hangs out with him, virtually inviting him into his wife's cunt. Does a husband who has children with his wife , talk about her to a bachelor friend, the way Marty does? Let's see how he handles his wife's/ Sam's bastard. What a shitty set of people!1*, since the rating can't go lower!!

Well.. I don't understand the negative comments. I actually liked it. Just a bit annoying all the yelling during sex. Admittedly, I probably would have liked it better if the husband WANTED his wife to have sex with Sam, instead of them cheating. Would have liked to see what happened after she gets pregnant though. It ended kind of abruptly.

With your preferences, you really should move to "Willing Cuckolds", if there is such a site on Literotica. You will feel much more fulfilled!! As to the story, sorry Ms. Tart, you only get 1* for this story line.

there could be a few more pages for sure on this story !!!!!! PLEASE

He dumb

She dumb

Drink your choice consequences your fault

Cucky in role playing she cheating good luck with that dumb ass

Both got what deserved

How it ends, FTDS (finishthedamnstory) wrote a sequel. Signed: BTW

I love FTDS ending!!! Duck this slut wife. Divorce her ASAP!!! RUN away now!!!

How you going to tell Sam he's a daddy, you cheating bitch?

throw this cheating whore out of the house. end like a shit without punishment

Drunk people do wake up if you make enough noise, so Sam drugged Marty and probably wifey too. It doesn't matter how she reacts after the NO, if he doesn't stop it's rape.

Marty is an idiot. Flaunting his wife to the world makes him one, and so does trusting a douchebag like Sam.

Please keep writing I loved it

Alcohol doesn't make you a gutter slut tramp - just being female does.

So, the cunt is going to let Marty raise Sam's little bastard. If she had an once of decency she get a fucking abortion. See, this is why the law should require a DNA test before a man's name can be put on a fucking birth certificate because married sluts can't keep their legs together.

Oh, get over it people! It's a fucking story already! The events are not real, it's just a really hot story.

Good up to the last page, then all wrong - a shame.

Sally tart.. who ever u are. It is tarts and faithless harlots like u that give women a bad name! I sincerely hope u end up with some STD that leaves u a barren whore!

Good read, and perhaps the ending is not quite right but I am not going to into that - it certainly was not for me but promising on how it could easily be re-written and the story line extended.

Thx for the read anyway!

"I love making some guy's wife cum all over my cock." - This wasn't SOME guy's wife, not that it would be right, this was his friend's wife.

This is almost what happened to me. We had 4 children. Been married 18 years. Our oldest Mike was 17, Rachel 16 Angie 14 Joe 13. My wife became pregnant. I was shocked. Really I thought after all the years I got fixed right after Joe was born and now she's pregnant? The more I thought the sicker I got. Did Debbie cheat on me? The dates lined up with my birthday. Long story short what I thought was a friend Bob that couldn't keep a marriage had impregnated my wife having sex 1 time. I had demanded DNA I wasn't the father. Debbie blamed it on the drinking. I threatened to divorce her telling her I didn't want to raise her and someone else's baby. Finally I said I would try to stay with her but if Bob ever found out I would divorce her and sue him for back child support. As fans I know he never did.

Glad other authors Finished the Damned Story!!!

That was disgusting. His wife and his friends are both cunts.

Kick the whpre out, then find some of the other husbands that the asshple has fucked over. Get them together, find the asshole, beat him almost to death then cut off this dick he is so proud of and stuff it down his throat and party while he suffocates on his own dick.

She deserves what ever comes her way... BTW- is there a follow-up? The husband is too inattentive and gets a share of the blame also, but I'll echo brooks103 - "This wasn't SOME guy's wife, not that it would be right, this was his friend's wife."

Some friend, but let's face it - all three of them are fucked up.

The end ruined the adventure for me. It would have been more interesting for the husband to tell her he woke up at some point and watched the fun pretending to be a sleeping or something.

NOW SHE'S KNOCKED UP. Marty she have a DNA test done, then kick the shit out of Sam, and cut his dick off. Then divorce his whore, using DNA so he doesn't pay support. He could even befriend a lady boxer or martial artist give her a worse than terrible beating after the assholes kid is born. She's a whore and not just the drinks made it happen.

What a fucking cunt. We can only hope that Marty finds out, kicks her and the little bastard to the goddam curb, and then gets a few friends and beats the living shit out of Sam.

It's not the end SWAMP DONKEY. trust me on that..lol

Do these women not know about abortions?

Dear Sally, I've given you 4 stars for the effort you put in specially the details of fornication.

But along with this, I'm upset too as you left the story hanging. We never knew what happened to them.

I also don't understand why Jackie didn't take the morning after pill, at least she could've avoided the unwanted pregnancy.

I think the husband got just what he was looking for. He wanted his wife to dress sexy and flirt with other men and he must have know it would lead to this. I think if he would have woked up as his wife was getting fucked he would have either joined in or jerked off watching them. I think the wife has nothing to be ashamed of other than the pregnacy which can be delt with in several ways.

Another wimp husband who the wife had no respect for.

Sounds to me like hubby got what he wanted, I do not get that shit myself, but if they are both into it eh guess it's up to them.

Yes, a messed up couple. BUT, and it's a BIG but, she did mess around in a very, very disrespectful fashion. The "bad" was on her alone. Adios, amiga. And permanently. This story deserves an interesting sequel.

I just read FinishTheDamnStory's sequel. Didn't like it, but at least, there was a partial ending.

Super HOT story!!!!

4 stars, you should of had her go to the store in the morning to take the morning after pill. This way you could of continued the story with Sam humiliating his to drunk little friend, while owning his wife, at least once a week.

After wife saw Sam ogling her when she dressed, a good wife would have told Marty that "Sam is not a gentleman and we are not going out which him."

Did she enjoy the divorce as much as the screwing over of her former husband?

On the one hand, formulaic. On the other hand, unrealistic.

poor grammar is sometimes painful to read, especially when the mistakes are consistent.

Such savagery from diapproving commenters. Yeah... this wife definitely deserved a divorce. Would the lover take on her support after with an infant? No. So she would definitely suffer real world consequences: loss of marriage, loss of family, a (maybe) older woman with an infant needing usual intensive care while she seeks or maintains a job, meanwhile in and out of court seeking child support from the lover. Translation: a really difficult life. Why would someone invoke violence? Unnecessary and unproductive. She would learn a hard lesson just from going forward. And, No, I would not take her back either. You can forgive perhaps, but seeing and knowing a fetus and infant parentage born of infidelity would make it hard or maybe impossible to reconcile for me. That is why there are so many children born of infidelity that the father has no knowledge of in the real world. But I also married a woman with a child not mine who also learned these lessons from prior infidelity. She learned her lessons by her own admission while we dated, and subsequent children were mine, confirmed by DNA test she initiatied.

Fantasy is one thing...but cheaters die a slow death. I would expect that Sam ditched here when she started showing, and her husband divorced her ass and found somebody younger and more faithful.

Story is not sexy....just sad.

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Sam is scum. She's stupid and a slut. Husband is a fucking moron and doesn't deserve a woman. Who would pretend to be someone else they know for his wife.

It'd be a knock down drag out fight if me it my wife loaned another name during sex. That's not sexy at all. Be there in the moment with the I've you love.

In this case blaming the alcohol is bull shit...

If it wasn't for Marty's vasectomy, Jackie would never tell him that the baby wasn't his. Surveys taken in maternity wards consistently have the same results. 15% of new mothers say that their husband is not the father of the baby. Other surveys have reported that in 20 percent of families having two or more children, the husband is not the father of at least one of the children. These surveys are for families that have not experienced divorce and are not a blended family. Nor do they include unwed mothers without a recognized partner. However in this case Marty will know unless Jackie can convince him with a bogus sperm count test that his tubing had healed itself from his earlier vasectomy.

@TAE352001. Reread the story. Jackie and Marty are 35, not nearing 50. They married soon after high school and have been married 17 years. Their two children are young teens, most likely 13 and 15. Their big dicked friend Sam is a couple years younger than them so 30 - 33. Sam is not pushing 50. Marty met him through work. For Sam to date women in their 20's is not an older-younger fetish or necessarily proof of a predator. Sam changes girl friends frequently because he doesn't want to settle down so he runs through girls who are running through men. I agree Sam is a jerk for setting his sights on Jackie, the wife of his "friend". Marty will know the baby isn't his because he had a vasectomy after their second child.

Remember Sam's date, big titted good ass 21 year old Ann, passed out in his vehicle. Write a sequel to establish Sam's credentials as a super stud. Have Sam take her home and put her to bed. He can join her and take a nap while she sleeps it off. When Ann awakens with her hangover, Sam can fuck her brains out until her hangover is gone. Put the story in Erotic Couplings.

I understand Sam. He is a friend but he can't help himself. There is something very special about having another man's wife orgasm on your cock as you thrust deep into her. Maybe it is a primal instinct of wanting to mate and produce offspring, but hearing a woman who has pledged herself to another man, ask you to cum in her is a feeling that is only equaled by emptying your balls into her grasping and gripping hot wet cunt.

Divorce, if it Sam’s baby!