All Comments on 'A Governess for Two 20-Somethings Ch. 04'

Glad this series took an incestuous turn. You're obviously a good writer, but the dialog seems stilted. It works for the mother perhaps but not the kids.

The story has had a directional shift. Yet it seems a natural move. So very easy for a brother and sister to drift together like this. Well done, let's hope there will be more!