All Comments on 'A Great Weekend'

The story started out with a grand idea but fizzed quickly. The story was too short in nature and clearly showed that this author lacks writing skills or could have done much better.

Much like premature ejaculation interrupting a masturbatory fantasy of a teenager, this scenario, ripe with promise, crashes to a far too premature climax.

Embryonic, she didn't cum, neither did I. The story was so boring my hand fell asleep!!