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All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 03: Revelations'

by Pars001

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jester9217jester9217almost 7 years ago
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Your story us decent but it seems rushed and take my word for it if it's rushed people will enjoy it less otherwise a decent beginning

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
namely

You used the wrong name a couple of times.

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Good one, so far...

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...