All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 20: Unforgiven'

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joshua4321joshua4321almost 7 years ago
Love your series

I love your story and gave it 5 stars, i think u should make them a little bit longer and have one of the jinn get pregnant, also u should continue adding jinn's to his harem

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great story

Great story, I think a little proofreading and punctuation would help

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Still going strong!!!

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...