All Comments on 'A Halloween Outing'

Wow. I really don't know what to say, other than that that was AMAZING. I want to be jennaslave! Although, there were a few things- the whole W/we, T/they thing does make sense, and it kind of works, but mostly it's just distracting. You also repeated the story- it's written here twice. But mostly, I am in awe of your skills and very much envious- I hope my pathetic writing might be as good as yours someday. Ever jealous,

Tanya Amelia

That was so fantastic, it made me want my master to come home...now;)

MasterMarks girl was ordered to select a story that met her fancy and this was it! I can only hope to serve my Master as well as Jenna served Jared. Jared was an understanding, kind and loving Master, as is mine. A Halloween Outing took the Master/slave relationship beyond the physical realm into true spiritual submission which I crave to offer Master Mark.

A delicious and intriguing love story...descriptive yet not overdone. Quite musical --as in hitting all the right notes. You got it all just perfectly right. Cheers and kudos! Thanks for a truly great read...thanks and take care -- hcl

An absolutely charming story - to be able to be so arousingly public and at the same time so lovingly alone with and in each other.

Awesome! Just absolutely awesome! Submission without extreme pain or humiliation; exactly what I dream about.

Loved this story!

I love the “idea” of submission without pain or humiliation. That is one of my fantasies, which I expect I will never get to fully experience since my husband is not interested in any kind of BDSM.