All Comments on 'A Halloween Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Getto

Nasty

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You REALLY Need An Editor!

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So badly written that it's almost unreadable. You need to work with an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good story I liked it

If it makes my dick hard, it must be good, thats what I say. AN editor would help, but not bad on the content. But what the fuck does "she blew a raspberry" mean?

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Good

Definitely needs editing and more description but thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wtf

u should all be ashamed of urselves!!

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