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All Comments on 'A Halloween Surprise'

by dabigbambino

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Couldn't get passed the start

Grammar and spell check! So many errors I just stopped reading

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really good but...

so many errors, it got a bit confusing at times! Really good plot though and really sweet at the end!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good story.

Despite the numerous grammar and spelling errors, it was a good read. Keep up the good work and use spell check.

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