All Comments on 'A Halloween to Remember'

Loved the story, even though your editor missed a couple of typos (witches' cauldron), missing quote marks and some perspective changes.

But those are technical flaws, and didn't detract from the story!

Sincerely, this presentation is a great start. (I disagree with the earlier comment about the writing flaws not detracting from reading the story.) Punctuation errors, dropped words, and all similar things do, indeed, make a story more difficult to read and follow. The story line is very good; but this is a wonderful rough draft, waiting for a re-write.

-- KK in Texas

i agree with anonymous in texas. especially the changes in perspective were confusing. so please edit. story itself was nice.

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