All Comments on 'A Happy End to School Life Pt. 01'

This is a good beginning and I hope to see more of it soon.

A good first chapter.

A promising start to a series, especially if the author makes chapters a little longer.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

Minus one for super cliche´ "big boobs" and "big dick".

Cute girls is one thing, 80% having HUGE knockers isn't even realistic for fantasy.

(Yes, you read that right.) Same for his dick...9" is 3" more than the American average, even more than that for international.

Minus second star for poor editing. Takes a person right out of the story at times, especially if we have to stop and figure out what we THINK you intended.