by RottenAppleAnnie
It was a difficult task, but this writer, got it done...This was today's worst story...1* (where are the lowest negative ratings when we need them?)
You poot Burn The Bitch lovers have to read cuck stories every day and get so upset and post your little hate remarks but yet you still come here every day and keep reading them .This is a good story,Just no wives were destroyed,Sorry
Hey, folks, don't bother with comments, they love the attention.
remembering a publisher of a small newspaper...he laughed at the stuff found in his paper. some of which was so bad it was funny... no score that is how I see it!
So predictable and boring and passionless. I couldn't finish it. Sorry.
Dont understand the reason behind this at all. Not entertaining just a disease waiting to happen.
Whats that crap for?? She is a slut he is an idiot and what now?? If you believe that that crap is erotic then you are one of the pervert idiots we always meet at that section of literotica!!!
Pretty sure that the two have nothing to do with one another. But any idiot knows that valium and alcohol don't mix. And why would she go anywhere with guys that treat her crudely? That makes no sense. The rest of the story was just a mess of suck and fuck. Some dumbass wrote a note so if she decides to press charges she has the note as evidence. I'm not sure a great editor could have saved this train wreck masquerading as a story but you might considering giving an editor a chance. This was simply awful.
Great story! More stories about slut wives, that's what this category is all about. Keep em coming! 5 stars
Look at the score! No one likes this crap except a few morons. Wait for the next legend's and you'll see what the category is all about.
I think somebody just called you a moron. By golly, I think he's right.
This was so bad I can't even decide where to start. Just please don't write any others like this
I can only assume you have not yet outgrown your pre-adolescent fascination with bodily fluids.
That was...wow. Forget the subject matter. This was just terribly written. Go back to school.
Was this just supposed to be a jackoff story, for someone who gets off on humiliating and gang banging a stupid woman? I guess that's OK, if that's what floats your boat, but it was so unbelievable and contrived that it read like some kind of pathetic cartoon. I think you should change venues and include pictures, lots of pictures. The illustrations don't have to be any better than the writing.
Kinda nailed it. Just either not enough or too many details to read as a coherent story. I tried to get it but valium as a fertility drug? Having four stiff drinks at lunch in motel room? As porn I suppose its more prurient than most. Decent grammar and spelling. 2*
Now if I understand, Dave the husband watches his wife fuck and suck three of her coworkers and he is alright with it because he knows that is really not you. Maybe she is not herself all the time. WHAT BULLSHIT.