by Menderman
hmm was this about Paris Hilton orPetra Hollis you got totaly sloppy in you name changes.Good story other than for the name errors.
Hmmmm, i noticed the slip in names as well catytheghost, one second she's petra and the next she's paris
A good read but the author did not know how to finish it and left the story hanging, needs a final conclusion
Yes, I agree - a poor ending, and the constant switching of names was very annoying. We all know who 'Petra' was supposed to be so there was no need to keep screwing around with the names.
love the story hope you carry it on would love to know the out come
The end is anti-climax but it's still poetic. I would hope the real Hollis got it good when she was inside.
This story had a very good begining, after that, turned some hard and its final is ... no final.