All Comments on 'A Hero's Downfall'

This story was great fun, got me quite hot. I hope there will be more chapters liberally littered with punishment and begging. Very well written!

great start

I am so hot right now I hope that there is more chapters of this with this, or even BDSM

His only thoughts were of how to kill her and escape. Dumb story.

Good job. Very entertaining.

Are awesome, there are few people who get the delectable taste of reluctance. When you slowly wither down a person's will. There's something... as from one of my favorite authors said: there is something darkly poetic about it.

BTdubs, loved it, please make another chapter, and ignore tem haters.

P.S. Oh, you like TheTalkMan too? I see you're a man of culture, as well.

Great to see you back! I really liked your first story, this one is even better. I hope you continue to write. We have similar interests.

While you might have used thetalkman as an influence you have missed the mark of his writing style your so called slow burn was more like a drenched campfire the sex scene while had meat missed the plot hope you improve in your writing style

One of my favorite stories on this site, a very enjoyable torture session.

Which could continue in so many ways, and I sure hope it will.

They maybe could be joined by an other sexy villainess (Mesmira ?), just a thought...

Make a part 2 please this was fantastic to read

I loved every single second of this. Take it from me, don’t listen to people who will try to change your writing because of what they want. Your writing is perfect because it’s yours. Keep it up, please!

Hello suducedbyevil just here to say do more like add to this story another book actually a couple more

This was hot

well damn this was hot! more please haha

Oh wow!!!! Man!!! Whew!!! I feel like I'm almost as worked up as Satellite was after reading this. This story was just incredible. I can't believe there are not more positive comments, but far more, I can't believe there are any negative comments. Seriously, I know I'm not supposed to say anything ugly about people but I can't help but wonder if there's not something wrong with anybody who can find fault with any part of this story. Maybe they just shouldn't be reading anything on Lit. OMG I want more of this. The author says, in his Bio. that there will be more, and I notice he did wait five and a half years between stories before so maybe, just maybe, another chapter's about to hit?