All Comments on 'A Highland Holiday Pt. 03'

interesting story , looking forward to more reading. thank you.

I enjoyed the way you wrote about how they made love the first time, very hot. I would have preferred no pain on entry. I know if you lube up right, a lube shooter or lube gun, there is no need for any pain during anal love making.

I got confused about the start of the boating scene after they had made love.

In Pt. 02, Josie had consent from both Fiona and Michelle to let Colin be a man who likes younger women. I would have like to hear that story line played out. There are a crazy number of options available. But I think it provides so many areas of contrast between what it is like to have a young trans-lesbian love affair, and an older, macho man fucking a new trans-girl.

Anyway, I enjoyed the story. Keep going girl.

Loving the story, and am really enjoying your descriptions of the area and its sights

Loved your story it felt like I was there as well. Looking forward to reading your other stories.

Kerryanne