All Comments on 'A Holiday Angel'

written. Good luck in the contest.

didnt buy the restroom scene but would love to have it happen to me. Need a room mate?

You write so well, I wished this story would never end. Good luck in the contest!

Your story was very erotic. I loved the progression. The end had an excellent twist. I did not want to stop reading it. The detail you left out in the time between the two met and the spa was very welcome. You kept the story moving. I was a little curious as to how the two ended up roomates at the end.

Enjoyed the build up between the two women thought the rest room scene added to that.

Enjoyed the build up between the two women thought the rest room scene added to that.

& I have to agree... I would have liked

another page or so! Very well written.

Best of luck to you in the contest!

This was a very sensual and erotic read... The characters were developed really well... your attention to detail shows that you are a gifted writer... keep it up and give us some more!

Good story!

Nirvana

What a lovely story! I could almost feel her lips on my neck.

you had me from the first moment on - I just couldnt help but fall in love with the characters.

you have a talent, Acadia

im so srry but this story is awful

yeah awfully amazing i loved it u had me from point 1

I really enjoyed this story, thank you for sharing it with us!

I liked that it was about two young women in their thirties seeking liberation from the men in their lives and finding themselves again, but the action was pretty predictable and didn't get me that hot.

Well, so far as I could tell, they had a lesbian experience and then went back to men?