All Comments on 'A Holiday of a Lifetime'

Love the story and WW's are so sexy...... on or off my favourite bikinis

The art of foreplay is not dead....

I masturbated through the entire story, thanks Richard NZ

I think I remember reading this story before under another author. Am I wrong?

Fantastic I wish you were my wife !!!!!!

This story takes great care in escalating the erotic activities without getting too long and involved. Other long stories often stray away from the path into irrelevant complexities. The impact is far better than many others who just jump to the XXX part without adding essential elements to make the storyline rational. Other authors need to practice this art. Good work! Hope to see more submissions from you.

This is the same story as Showing in Bali by rogerenjoyslooking