All Comments on 'A Holiday Pleasure'

A very good start, I hope this story continues! Thank you!

Can't wait for the sequel! With days like this, every day should be a holiday!!!

I thought this was a good start

This was a great beginning. Please continue. Jan needs to show her young lover all the ways of lesbian love.

Love it. Devil in the details can't wait to read what you have in store for this sexy couple

This was extremely sexy and sensual. I really enjoyed reading your story. I would love to hear more about the girls and what happened next.

Thanks so much. I loved how they could hardly wait until they got through the door!

A very hot story told very nicely. It made me very..excited.

A great story, well written lesbian seduction, one can imagining happening was written as though it had actually happened

what a great story, I too wonder what happened next, or IF Jan ever explained why her passion was with a younger woman, rather than her hubby at home. I really liked this 5 star story.

What a gorgeously well written and paced story. xxx

I thought it was a fun read. Just the right length for the middle of the day.

Really promising work Katie.

I think it was great short/med-length read with sufficient info to convey the setting, the interest in her beautiful older partner from the first night's events, and then your building of momentum through to the end was excellent.

I guess one could question the reason for bringing her daughter's friend on holiday rather than someone her own age, or bringing her own daughter for that matter, but the explanation that she'd fancied her for some time covers it well enough.

Can't wait to see more of your work.

BTW: Loved the nod to Linda Carter too. ;-)

You had me at Linda Carter! 😜

I loved the slow buildup of sexual tension between the 2 characters.