All Comments on 'A Homecoming for My Son'

by friskycharlene

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 7 years ago

Very sexy. A followup chapter in England would be good as they wouldn't have to be restrained like at home.

onlyfictiononlyfictionover 7 years ago
4 stars

A very good start, and a solid end. The middle got a bit wishy-washy, and the sex scene begged for more description.

Overall a good story.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 7 years ago
What every absent boy dreams of

Loved how their was mutual love/desire and no hidden remorse.

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67over 7 years ago
Quite torrid and lovely. Five

So glad you are back writing for Literotica after your long hiatus. Please do keep writing more like this.

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 7 years ago

Awesome, awesome story, and beautifully written. Well worthy of 5 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Homecoming indeed

Well done excellent erotic read.

juanviejojuanviejoover 7 years ago
Cinco Estrellas!

Just a hot little fantasy, maybe?

LarsMacombLarsMacombover 7 years ago

Erotic and elegant. Key strength is the believability of mom's inner dialogue, along with the intensity of the interaction with her son in the critical moments of contact while in the airport. Very nice!

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 7 years ago
Wow

so are we going to england?

ForbiddenTemptationForbiddenTemptationover 7 years ago
Well written with a sexy plot

I have a thing for mother/son taboo in particular. And also for infidelity. Combining the two makes it even kinkier which just adds to the arousal.

Can't wait for the next chapter where I hope they get to continue exploring their secret. Maybe when she visits she discovers Ryan has a girlfriend now and he has to sneak around with his mom behind the girlfriends back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bravo

Nice writing. Nice plot. Nice emotions.

Hope to see her in england and hope to get a lovely romantic late with a realistic end with some drastic decision taken by the both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice but...

A well written and scintillating story. But I'm going to swim against the current of cudos from everyone else. To me the thing that kills this story is the outlandishly huge cock. His balls were resting on her pussy lips and the base of his cock was against her clitoris. His cock in this position extended above her belly button???

He should be in a carnival side show. For me it made the story crash and burn. It had the potential to be a 5* but I had to give it a 3*.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
well writtem famtasy

Mom and Son,,,,a classic, erotic,,,,deeply sexual

quite exciting

and UK to look forward to for them and of us readers

t/y from

a very wet

Jen

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The trip comes.

Waiting for mom's trip to England...

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 4 years ago
Would love to read about the rest of the story

The trip to England for a 2 week break. Dad dies some how, word reaches them the day before she is to return home. They both go home. Then find out she's pregnant and semi wealthy they go back to England to finish college and start their family.

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Absolutely Loved It

Great Story and I would love to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love yo read it again n again...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

5 stars. Wonderful story. I love mom son incest stories

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Loved the story but after their first sex together there was not much to it there should have been more information on their sex encounters !!!!! You should continue till she goes to England and their sexual exploits continue gave it 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very good, nicely written. More of it 😊

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