All Comments on 'A Honeymoon That Would Never End'

by Orexis

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nitegazernitegazeralmost 16 years ago
A well told tale

Master, Not my personal fantasy perhaps, but I enjoyed the telling of it. You have a way with words, they paint vivid pictures in the minds of your readers... thank you - slave

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What the?!?

What made u stop it there? God! U need to write a Part 2!!! x

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Keep going.

That can't be the end.

GeorgeSucarGeorgeSucarabout 14 years ago
Awesome!

Fucking awesome, dude!

Raging boner right through!

Check out mine!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Excellent story, I love it when a prissy bitch learns to love fucking like a common whore.

Craig52Craig52over 10 years ago
Very hot

I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Already?

I hope this story has not ended. Does Carla become a member of the gang? What happens to George down the line?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

FINISH THE FUCKEN STORY.

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8about 8 years ago
What a waste off fucking time

If you're going to write a fucking story, FINISH IT...you dumb fuck..

Moonshine57Moonshine57about 3 years ago

Good story. However, some of the terminology was a little high brow for my taste, and I would have preferred your version of that mule dick destroying Carla’s pussy over the version from my imagination. I hope there’s a part two at some point.

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