All Comments on 'A Hot, Wet Blossom Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Story

Can't wait to see him in bed with the white mother and daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Excellent!

Good detail in an excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
A Good Start

It's a damn good start, wordy in places but great overall. Try to avoid the cliches

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