by Tatonka
Love the slow burn, excellent stuff...Mancelt.
Your story is well written and keeps the readers interest but for most of us, you are heading in a direction we would not like to go. IF the husband is setting the slut wife up so he can catch her cheating and then exact revenge from her and the man she is going out to Colorado to fuck this is a great lead in. Many of us, I am sure, are at a slow boil. I can see a great story evolving from this lead in if you go the revenge route but if you are going to make the husband into a wimp who puts up with a cheating wife, you have lost many of us.
A new treatment of an old storyline - I will be reading additional installments as they appear.
A new treatment of an old storyline - I will be reading additional installments as they appear.
She is going to fuck this guy, "Big John" no matter what her husband says. By the time she gets back from her trip, she'll have her pussy stretched out to fit "Big John", and her wimp of a husband will just have to put up with her slutty ways. Thanks for the chapter......Rich
the fuck, the trip, everything was planned before he talked to her. He let her wear a hot wife anklet in public without even telling her what is meant, get real. The woman is a manipulator. the guy is a stupid asshole. She is already fucking around but hasnt decided to tell him yet but the neighbors know. Let here tell him the truth and let him decide to accept it or divorce her. She has already accepted the possible medical risk of fucking around but husband has been put in harms way without prior knowledge. Personnally I think this woman is a piece of trash and he needs to recycle.
wannabe gays but most of the men here will consider this woman already cheating and he is just giving her the opportunity to give him the upper had in divorce action.
Toomany lies... the husband knows is a fake travel, it´s too much, even for a wimp, accept all the lies.They are dead, just don´t know yet.
This is a story. In fiction anything can happen. Let it. Why do some readers always think that stories always have to be true?
This is building up nicely. I hope hubbie can deal with it when she gets down to some superb, nasty fucking and sucking. Go for it!
The story is interesting and believable, and it holds my attention nicely. However, beyond the wife with her girlish figure and dress and younger men coming on to her; and her ten year's older husband with his curiosity as to whether she will or will not give out to younger men like John, there's not much going on except for the regular drinks the couple have together out on the back patio. I feel that the author has painted the wife as one who really would like to experience another man (John!) but at the same time is inhibited by her nature to be loyal to her husband. Hopefully Tatonka will have some surprises for us in the third episode. RAG
I loved it. This has always been my fantasy for my wife. When she leaves on business I figure out what she has packed and secretly hope it is thongs and towering heels.
Please hurry with the next chapter.
He better hope his wife doesn't cheat one him. With his five strokes and done he can't be satisfying his wife. She hooks up with John he will make Sandy think what she saw at all with her husband. Alex is going to crash and burn and he doesn't even see it coming!
I can relate to the basic story. I love my wife being a cock tease by flashing her tits, dressing sexy and at times going topless while we are along the coast. I think the best compliment another man can give my wife is to be sexually turned on by her. "JoyRider"
boring effort... Once again, only the little dicks & daddy fuckers will enjoy these commentaries. OMG - is the author related to the retards called anonymous ?
“Five or six strokes and shoot my load...”
I mean, im on social security so do the math, and i can still pump for a couple hours...whats wrong with todays boys?
The husband's innermost thoughts & desires are depicted bang on!
Excerpt from the story:
"... I found one of her new thong bikinis in her drawer and snuck it into her suitcase. It was like the blue one she was wearing earlier, very silky, only a light pink color. I closed her case..." [Very very telling, very very EROTIC too! More chapters follow!]
My wife giggled with delight as we read about Sandy seducing her husband into insisting that she take some sexier clothing on her business trip.
He asked, “Aren't you going to take anything to wear if you decide to go out to a club or something?" So, they packed her a sexy outfit.
Next, the hubby asked her if there was a swimming pool at the hotel. Then, he secretly put her sexiest biking in her suitcase. OMG! That is hot!
This is exactly how it works: a wife conditions her husband and then cuckolds him. That’s what my wife did to me – and we are very happy about it!