All Comments on 'A Hot Wife Story'

That was a good beginning, hope to see a part 2.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Why would someone waste the time to comment on a story he/she didn't read? If you choose not to read a story because you feel it isn't the type you want to read, don't waste our time saying you didn't read it because of the type story it is.

***** That being said, my real criticism has to do with character switching - I understand you are trying to tell the story from both perspectives, but that is best done by telling the whole story in third person....If you don't understand how to do that, grab one of the free editors here on Literotica to help you out.

Personally, I don't like where this is going but hope you continue with the rest of the story. She gave herself away when she came home with a "Hot Wife" ankle bracelet.

It was nice and I hope you continue. I would rethink the format and stay in third person as the switching was a tad distracting, but not a deal breaker. Also some discourse between the primaries to explain the difference between a physical response and an emotional one to her having an affair would be nice. Overall a good start. Don't listen to the idiots here, thank you for sharing and again I hope you continue.

with all the changes is person/POV. It went from the lead charachter being "they" to being "we" and from hubby being "he" to "I" and back. They also seem kind of dim-witted.

More please.

....since your bio doesn't say anything and that seems to be more prevalent with female writers. It would be mind blowing and special if this didn't turn into a cuck story.And to the person who wrote "don't waste our time"-who's us? Don't read the comment if you don't like it.Now it's time for the swinger from OR to tell us what losers we are because we don't think like her-pistolpackinpete

What a wonderful friend Barb is. She got Sandy to wear the ankle bracelet: The first step in making Sandy a hot wife. They will make a great pair when they go out next Friday to get laid.

I'd like to see it. Alex probably would, too, sooner or later.

The story moved along fine, but the abruptly changing point of view was difficult. Also you begin with the statement this is a loving marriage, but right off the bat you have here wondering if you will give into the office advances. There is no evolution in here character. One minute she is a faithful loving wife and the next she thinking about being unfaithful.

Nice writing - very erotic. Keep it going

I felt so enthralled with this story that I ignored any faults, and never really noticed them (comments below). I read a story for what it says, and am only put off by huge glaring faults. As I said - I enjoyed this story, and look forward to where it is going.

Well we know where this going, Sandy is going to get her pussy stretched out to fit Big John. Will she toss poor old Alex to the side once she gets stuffed by John?

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A very hot beginning. I'm looking forward to reading more.

I would like to thank you all for your comments. I agree that I jumped around a bit. Thanks to those who liked the story even with a few flaws. Please read the following chapters, you won't be disappointed. I have taken your advise about writing in third person. Sandy is going to get hotter as the story progresses.

Bitches like this should be locked-up in asylum somewhere!!

So 1*.

These stupid people who are so negative should get real, stop reading the damm story and look elsewhere. There is no need for rudeness . Get your kicks some other way.

5 stars : sexy

How this story began: "Sandy Blair is an attractive, married, loving wife and mother...", but just a few lines and we found out this wasn't true...she was a conniving bitch...1*

Just another heartless Cunt and a sissy loser husband. Pathetic

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It isn't a hot wife story as much as a cheating wife story. Still don't understand the weak submissive male stereotype; don't like it either. Is there some reason you can't say naked, rather than nude? Hitting some of my sensitive areas.

Not wife is a whore by any definition. This one was whore and husband a cuck.

She sure isn't a loving wife. And when she shows her husband that she has no love or respect for him, I figure it took him a nano second to file for a divorce. I hope she enjoys her divorce as she earned it. Now she's neither a loving wife or a married one. Just another sorry, self centered slut on her own trying to support herself.

1 star

Some husbands unbenownst to them have a strong voyeur side. I know that for a fact because i am one of them.

Tatonka depicts her husband's thoughts & his state of mind very very well. In a similar situation i was in a hypnotic transe of sorts, unable to act.

In my experience if your wife decides to have sex with another man (or men) you have 3 options:

(1) file for divorce, or (2) go for an open-marriage arrangement, or (3) accept her and love her the way she is.

A young wife begins to condition her husband. Really? Condition him to accept his gayness, which rivals that of the writer? The kind of conditioning as in opening the closet door?

My wife found this and we both enjoyed it tremendously. Sandy is beginning to prepare her husband to be a cuckold. Years ago my wife began the same routine: dressing sexy, dancing with other men, and seeing how my cock responded when she told me all about it later in bed. Your story could be a ‘how to’ manual for wives who want to stray!

We like stories like this that begin slow and them amp up! It's just a matter of time until John is in Sandy's panties!

5 (☆☆☆☆☆)!

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I replied, "Sandy, honey it would break my heart if you had sex with someone different."

Then she said, "I wouldn't have guessed it by that horny penis of yours, it's been poking me in the stomach harder every time we talk about someone wanting me."

"Sandy, I just want you, couldn't we just make love again now."

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❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆ (5)! I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY BECAUSE IT IS EROTIC AND REALISTIC, 2-in-1!

Some husbands unbenownst to them have a strong voyeur side. I know that for a fact because i am one of them.

Tatonka depicts her husband's thoughts & his state of mind very very well.

In a similar situation i was in a hypnotic trance of sorts, unable to act.

In my experience if your wife decides to have sex with another man (or men) you have 3 options:

(1) file for divorce, or

(2) go for an open-marriage arrangement, or

(3) accept her and love her the way she is.