All Comments on 'A Housewife'

I really like the premise, but can't get past the horrible grammar to read it. Did anyone bother to edit this story?

How nice it would have been if this story had been written in English! A great premise was ruined by the awful writing.

I hate to add to the previous comments, but... I did not even get half way through the first page before I could no longer take it! Is english your native tongue? Either way, find a buddy who will edit your stories before you post... I do however appreciate your courage in posting... more than I've done!

A really liked this story so thank you! The English is not American but I still really understood it and enjoyed it. Having lived in Malaysia for 5 years a while ago I know how Malaysians speak English and much better than many Brits or Americans even if they write it differently. So thank you, don't listen to the comments about spelling or grammer and please keep writing!!!!

Well. This is not the first time readers comment about the bad English. Too bad as this the best that I can do and afford to do. Find an editor.... ummmm...

For those who are not so bordered about the grammer, please continue to feed me back. For those Professor in English... sorry... maybe next time.

Msisa Exhibitionist

i have read all of your stories and love them. was hoping that you would submit a new story. thank you. eagerly awaiting your next. i've been to malaysia too which makes the stories all the more interesting :)

Hi Michelle .. love ur stories. I'm inspired by your stories and you motivated me to start writing my own exhibitionist experiences. Its alot of fun exposing in our conservation country especially for me ... Nadiya S

Hi,

Keep telling us more...I like this story especially coming from your perspective.

Clive

The small mistakes make the story more entertaining. Don't change anything!

This story read like it was translated from some other language by a cyber-translator. and then not edited. Unreadable.

The language was so bad, it was like Jar Jar Binks had written it. Once I couldn't get that voice out of my head I had to stop reading. Even if English is your second language, you should have an editor go over it to smooth out the edges. Many people will do it for free and it will make the story much better.

The poor gramnar makes the story difficult to read.

I had to stop reading...i did try, but could not take the poor grammer...sorry:(

English obviously isnt first language, but i thought you did great better than i would in Malaysian that's for sure.

I’m not sure if English is the characters second or your second language. If so, please let the readers know. I had to stop reading; the grammar made it very difficult to read.

This was an amazing adventure. I thought some of my wife's real-life stories were good but this one would have been a dream come true. Thank you for posting all the stories.

I loved it. I don't care about the English professor's opinions. It got me very wet. Thank you for sharing it and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Find yourself an editor and work on your English...too difficult to read...I moved on to another story.