All Comments on 'A Humiliating Loss'
by decadent_kate
- 11 Comments
wdelanderover 13 years agoI like what you said in your profile about not using physical descriptions... I agree, it's better for the reader to use their imagination.
manualdownloadover 13 years agoYour story was very hot, and I totally agree with you and the previous comments about leaving the people in the story to the readers' imagination. Look forward to reading more of your writing.
Anonymousover 13 years agoGreat story, very hot, especially being written by a woman. Thank you.
Maturinover 13 years agoyep, you're right on about leaving things to the imagination. Please keep writing!
Anonymousalmost 13 years ago**SPOILER ALERT**
In the next chapter, Alex wins the game of poker, her debt is erased, and everybody goes home. Am I right?
LordSlamdawggover 12 years agoWriter has skills though maybe not enough to pay the poker bills. Regardless this was a excellent story, thanks !
Anonymousover 12 years agoThe story has possibilities. Making a judgment from a story that has just started is really not very reliable. I would like to read more and then the stoy could gl the way to five stars.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThey should have just taken her. She was wet and horny and wouldn't have put up much of a fight. If there is more to come, I'd like to see her come to the conclusion that she liked being their plaything and maybe lose deliberately.
