All Comments on 'A Job in the Theatre Ch. 13'

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yorkie54yorkie54over 14 years ago
GREAT

Another great instalment that quickly had me stroking my hard cock and cumming over my hand. I hope we don't have to wait too long before the next part is published

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I like the story except for the fantasy surgery.

You have made Paula's surgery seem like a day at a health spa. That she could do it in between days of doing her acting. She had face surgery and breast implants put in. But in and out of the clinic in no time and with no bandages nor any pain mentioned. She should be in pain and be bandaged up and wearing a bra for support until the tissue around the breasts heals and can support the weight. She should not be able to use and play with the breasts so soon after the surgery. She would be sore and not be able to move around much. In trying to ignore the reality of pre-op transsexual surgery, you have made your story seem more fantasy than a realistic story.

agamottoagamottoalmost 8 years ago
nice, as a fantasy, but...

I have to agree with anon 07/01/13, She should have been in bandages for a few days, if not weeks, to heal from the surgery.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I’ve been so hard and dripping precum since I started reading this!!!

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