All Comments on 'A Journey by Train Pt. 02'

I was about to scold you for not submitting part 3 already, but then I noticed that this was put up today. This has been quite delicious so far, I await the next chapter with bated breath.

This story is so sensuous and gets better and better as it keeps you guessing about the next twist. Now looking with eager anticipation to reading Pt 03!

Hallo Mistress_Christine!

I like where your story is going, it's just getting hotter and hotter,,, yes!

5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms, :-)

Gay Kat.

Hi Christine,

As you know, I am not into any of this kind of thing, but I found this curiously erotic in ways I can't really explain. As always beautifully written.

Hugs

Anna

xxxx

This is a very rare instance of successfully using first-person narrative to tell a story from multiple characters. Add to that, the extremely erotic plot elements and this breaches the upper tier of a 5-star rating.