All Comments on 'A Journey by Train'

... please don't make us wait too long for a second! Nice work -- five stars.

Lovely introduction, quite thrilling and as beautifully written as always!

Thank you

With affection

Corinne xxxx

Paragraph 5, married..........Paragraph 8, breakfast quick toast and coffee....paragraph 11.........Row with GIRLFRIEND over breakfast...these inconsistencies tend to make me back up and try to understand who is who, and what is going on ?

was distracted and missed the two alternating narratives.....MY BAD <3

This is the beginning of a very sexy tale. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Public masturbation plus domination is a HUGE turn on for me

Please continue this story! Thank you for sharing it with us!

horny as hell, guess I might be late for work also.. good story.

Very well written and very erotic, loved how you developed the story and characters through the two different points of view. Looking forward to later chapters to see how the adventure unfolds.

I too am reading this prior to going to a meeting and, yes, I'm going to risk part two. So hot. so realistic about the addictive nature of erotic fiction. 5*

Hallo Mistress Christine!

A beautiful story very sexy and well written, thank you,,, 5&5 _ 5-Stars and 5-Wet Orgasms, :-)

I can't wait to read chapter 2.

From a very wet and horny dyke friend,

Gay Kat.

Mistress Christine,

It's 3 in the morning was going to go to sleep but decided to see what your story was about first time of here and you have me dripping. Going to have to read more. Thank you for your story Ma'am.

Amber

Such a wonderful story. One of my fantasies is sex on a train. You have extended this beautifully. xx

...and told with such great style!!!

I struggled at first with the dual narration, but then started to enjoy the two perspectives.

Very nice.

Joey.