All Comments on 'A Journey through Pleasure Ch. 01'

Badly. Might have been a good story. Couldn't finish it. So no rating.

Has to have been written by an idiot using words that don't exist, such as "cummed" which any grade school aged kid knows should have been "came". What other garbage is to be found likely much. Remove this story and save readers eye strain.

The poor grammar and bad dialogue ruined what could have been an enjoyable story.

Could have been a good story, BUT ...

• The author couldn't write

• The characters were implausible

• The plot was weak or non-existent

• The misspellings and grammar blocked readers from going further

• The author didn't have enough sense to edit their work

One star.

Just couldn't get past the poor use of language,