All Comments on 'A Journey to Desire Ch. 01'

Just when I was getting bored with most stories, this fantasy has captured my attention. Being patient and waiting for the story to unfold has me "waiting in a hurry."

Can't wait for the rest of story.

Great foreplay in this set up for the Readers. Excellent pacing. Seems like an authentic type of adventure. Really anxious to see the next chapter. Fantastic set-up.

Need more.

Waiting to hear what has driven the apparent change in the wife's libido...

Also awaiting the next chapter (s)! Not being a writer I admire those that are talented!!

Love this story - off to a great start. Can't wait to see where it goes. And - this could be my wife - at least in the first part. :)

Can't wait for chapter 2!

Great start. Please more soon. Like to read a bit more as to how they explore possibilities with one another & their emotions around all that. Also as one other commentator intimated, what are the emotional / physical drivers behind the wife's change of attitude? Ken

Looking forward to the rest of the chapters!!

The name of the resort changes in mid-stream.

I think the anonymous commenter above needs to go back and re-read the story.

You sound like I would like to sound were my wife to become so hot !

I am waiting with baited breath and a stif cock

Great start and nicely written.

For a second I thought this was my story. (Of course by story I mean my life)

Soooo similar and so exciting to read.

I remember when Temptations became 'famous' in the UK (there was a late night TV series about it on one of the minor channels in the late 80s) while I was still a horny teenager and the idea sounded great.

The thing that got my mind going the most was what was behind the wife's sudden change of heart. What's she been up to, with whom? Is this holiday an excuse to open up their marriage when they get home?

What a bitter, cynical and twisted old fart I've become!! LOL

We like the nice slow approach. However, you don't explain why/how the wife changed so drastically in her sexual desire. From tacitly permitting him to have sex with her, she now is initiating it. It would be interesting to know her evolution in her own words, or in her own thoughts.

excellent introduction. You write in a manner I truly appreciate....