All Comments on 'A Journey to Desire Ch. 05'

We kind of skipped the first few parts as we were just reading to add to the mood. But we read parts 4 and 5 and we really enjoyed them.

As for not being anything like a swinger??? I dunno. Ok the sex party with the money was a little out there, but the idea is supposed to be fantasy. It bores us when people talk about fantasy as though it should reflect a true account.

Honestly if you want that go watch a documentary about swinging.

But the actual sex seemed fairly realistic, well it was similar to some experiences we have had in terms of swinging. A big thumbs up from us 2.

As for the Troll, lol

Keep it up reading stories about sex and then spouting morality. Nice try.

Desire was such a magical place. Our week there was wonderful. We can relate to some of the stories for sure. Brought back happy memories.

Great Story.

Oh buddy who slam swingers. Its just you. Swingers are the friendliest people we have ever met. No one likes a hater.

I very much enjoyed all 5 storys. I gave the firsts only #4s. yes they were very good, excellent really. But #5 with the memoies of the earlyer 4, made the series outstanding!!

I liked the way you had many of these chapters on 1 page. I liked that. The other things I liked, characters believable, activities believable, dialog after the action, very good. Endurance believable under the circumstances highly sexual atmosphere.

I'm going to read a lot more of your stuff. I really like it, Thank You!!

The beginning was much better than the last chapter. Given that this is "group sex" I was hoping there would have been some FMF parts since that's a big fantasy for some (myself included).

Well written and edited. Storyline flows nicely. Would suggest another chapter or story giving his wife's POV. What got her interested in being an exhibitionist and swapping/sharing? Seemed out of the blue for her to suggest it.

This was an incredibly HOT story! Thanks!

We thought that it was a most accurate portrayal, of how lots of couples arrive at selecting Desire Resort and Spa as their vacation destination. It was also a fairly accurate portrayal of "a takeover week" at Desire. We are returning with The Hot Tamales group, May 3-10, 2014! Anyone interested?

Captivated all they through. Really enjoyed it.

I like your writing style. Your five chapter story was hot.

I loved, and lusted as I read these five stories. Hot, sex and exciting.

I want to go, with my wife, to this resort and have similar adventures.

Thanks for a good read.

And a hard cock that stayed hard for all five stories.

Joe

I read all five parts and enjoyed them all. Very arousing, I sometimes fantasise about watching my wife with another guy, or have her suck him while I have sex with her. Not sure we would go this far though! Thanks for writing.

This was a great story from the beginning to the end. Very detailed and flowed pretty well. Thanks again and keep writing

Great story, reminds me of a relationship I was once in. Can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the good work

I would really enjoy watching my wife go crazy for strange cocks and more

Thank you very much for making it real

Desire is a resort that I have had on our "must try" list for a while. These stories just add to the "desire" to try it. The scenes are very realistic, great job!

5* across the series.

I was cynical of the early chapters as to where this would lead, but after some nice experiences and a good wind up at the end I am happy to be proven wrong.

1 minor niggle, chapters 3 and 4 confused me a little talking about daily routines which gave the impression a couple of days had passed between chapters and it was either the same day or the the one following the previous chapter.

Author is now on my favourites.

Having been to Desire a couples of times and 3 more times this year i can pretty much guarantee that the author has been there. This is really close to what happens there and how it goes down with the exception of the “auction” part of the story.

Beyond that— the pool, playroom, pizza, disco and even the way he described the layout is accurate. Thanks for writing.

Since the comment has been made a couple of times, I figured I’d weigh in. The story about the auction that took place in the disco actually happened. If you’re interested in knowing the name of the travel group that hosted the party, feel free to write to me. However, it’s been almost a decade since that happened. I don’t know if that group still exists, and if they do, if they still host that wild party.

Sometimes truth is stranger than fiction!

Thank you. This was a great series of stories. I liked the fact that you broke them up in to more manageable bites. The ending conclusion of how their lives and relationship were improved is a nice touch. Looking forward to reading some of your other stories.

Great storey, i enjoyed every bit of it and it kept me realy aroused.