All Comments on 'A Journey To Remember Ch. 02'

You've built a great plot! Keep it coming!

You still need to find an editor because your sentences are running together, and sometimes the story doesn't flow as smoothly as it should. Story flow comes with proper punctuation, proofreading, and separating of thoughts.

The plot is good, but please; do yourself a favor. Go over to the editor's forum and ask if someone will help edit your story.

keep it going

Please continue the story, but I agree, you need an editor.

Example - "I always I imagined having you on your back"

I always imagined having you on your back. The "I" is not required.

Perhaps inspired by the hit movie 'Titanic', but missing genuine Iceberg locations? May your 'Heart Go On' with this theme, with few reservations!

Albeit reader comments were well intentioned, seeking editorial help is a mandatory requirement in our view!

buenisimo, ella esta secuestrada por un hombre belliisimo y rico, la tiene a su merced y no le da la liberacion que ella tanto anhela. que va a pasar en los siguientes capitulos que espero que muy pronto lo hagas, vos a estar con mucha ansiedad por leerlos

But you misuse words. Makes it really hard to enjoy a story while trying decipher meanings.