All Comments on 'A Journey To Remember Ch. 03'

good story

alucinante (en nuestro pasi quiere decir fabuloso, muy lindo y demas adjetivos relacionados) capitulo, espero mu pronto otros capitulos con mucha ansiedad; am_sr

I am really enjoying this story so far. I cant wait for the next chapter to be posted. I hope everything works out somehow with them.

Hmm... I wonder if she will be getting pregnant soon...if she isnt already! :)

thank you all for reading my first story

I hope you do bring the impregnation into this story. I look forward to reading more. Please continue writing.

but it really needs some basic editting, at times the wrong use of words make the story hard to understand. I really hope that you meant table beside the bed not toliet (commode).

Very hot. Seriously. I love your concept. I really love how much he wants Jenny. Good writing. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

-Jaz